@Reis
Ah, okay. Yeah, the first one was a bit odd, I admit. I'm not used to writing in inner monologues; that's a learning curve for me. It's like limited first person writing, just far more interactive. Like I have explain everything, as it happens through first person perspective, but in a way that makes it seem like a character's thought process as opposed to just dialogue.
It's complicated, but I appreciate the feedback. Hope you'll stop by next week for Entry #03.
@AverageJoe
Oi, I feel like a ditz. Sorry for the confusion. I guess ol' 0kamii can't take a joke. Well regardless, it was very punny.
- 0kamii
Ah, okay. Yeah, the first one was a bit odd, I admit. I'm not used to writing in inner monologues; that's a learning curve for me. It's like limited first person writing, just far more interactive. Like I have explain everything, as it happens through first person perspective, but in a way that makes it seem like a character's thought process as opposed to just dialogue.
It's complicated, but I appreciate the feedback. Hope you'll stop by next week for Entry #03.
@AverageJoe
Oi, I feel like a ditz. Sorry for the confusion. I guess ol' 0kamii can't take a joke. Well regardless, it was very punny.
- 0kamii
Amethyst Ωmega - Guild Leader/Founder
