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Rate my team coverage :) - JaBird - Sep 15, 2017

Hi! i finished my team just a few days ago and was wondering if anyone would improve it(Swap pokemon for others,swap items, movesets ETC..)
 Yanmega @ Life Orb                              
Ability: Speed Boost  
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe  
Modest Nature  
- Air Slash  
- Bug Buzz  
- Protect  
- Psychic
                                    
Scizor @ Choice Band  
Ability: Technician  
EVs: 206 HP / 252 Atk / 50 Spe  
Adamant Nature  
- Bullet Punch  
- U-turn  
- Superpower  
- Pursuit

Conkeldurr @ Assault Vest  
Ability: Guts  
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 SpD  
Hasty Nature  
- Drain Punch  
- Mach Punch  
- Knock Off  
- Thunder Punch

Garchomp-Mega @ Garchompite  
Ability: Sand Force  
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Poison Jab  
- Outrage  
- Swords Dance  
- Earthquake

Ambipom @ King's Rock  
Ability: Technician  
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe  
Adamant Nature  
- Fake Out  
- Beat Up  
- Fury Swipes  
- Fling

Sigilyph @ Wacan Berry  
Ability: Wonder Skin  
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe  
Modest Nature  
IVs: 0 Atk  
- Air Slash  
- Dark Pulse  
- Hypnosis  
- Energy Ball

Any help is appreciated thanks!


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - Reis - Sep 15, 2017

not gonna lie i am not good at vgc, but i will save others time by linking you to "how to make a help post 101"

http://pokemonforever.com/Thread-PSA-Regarding-Competitive-Discussion-Rules

oops im sorry if this came across as rude, i didn't mean to be v.v


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - JaBird - Sep 15, 2017

(Sep 15, 2017, 07:17 PM)Reis Wrote: not gonna lie i am not good at vgc, but i will save others time by linking you to "how to make a help post 101"

http://pokemonforever.com/Thread-PSA-Regarding-Competitive-Discussion-Rules

oops im sorry if this came across as rude, i didn't mean to be v.v

Hey thanks man i wasnt aware(just got on the site)


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - Reis - Sep 15, 2017

(Sep 15, 2017, 07:22 PM)JaBird Wrote:
(Sep 15, 2017, 07:17 PM)Reis Wrote: not gonna lie i am not good at vgc, but i will save others time by linking you to "how to make a help post 101"

http://pokemonforever.com/Thread-PSA-Regarding-Competitive-Discussion-Rules

oops im sorry if this came across as rude, i didn't mean to be v.v

Hey thanks man i wasnt aware(just got on the site)

okay, that's cool ^_^


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - Spyro190 - Sep 15, 2017

Wich tier is that for?


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - JaBird - Sep 24, 2017

(Sep 15, 2017, 09:35 PM)Spyro190 Wrote: Wich tier is that for?

Battle spot singles S/M


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - Chansey - Sep 24, 2017

I'd be a little bit worried about fire, with two bugs including a 4x, and nothing to neutralize fire besides Garchomp.  I sort of wish you also had a water type of the team...  I could be wrong.


RE: Rate my team coverage :) - Spyro190 - Sep 25, 2017

The biggest problem for this team is Scarf Lele: with SR on your field it destroys all your pokèmon. Even Scizor can't switch on its Psychic safely, so your only possibility to survive is leading with Garchomp (wich isn't OHKOed by Psychic and OHKOes it with Poison Jab) and using Scizor (wich takes nothing from Moonblast) to Pursuit Lele. That said, Lele isn't always Choiced, and if your oppo lead with another pokèmon you lose.

252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 0 HP / 0 SpD Yanmega in Psychic Terrain: 183-216 (113.6 - 134.1%) -- guaranteed OHKO

252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 206 HP / 0 SpD Scizor in Psychic Terrain: 70-83 (40.9 - 48.5%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 206 HP / 0 SpD Scizor in Psychic Terrain: 70-83 (40.9 - 48.5%) -- 70.3% chance to 2HKO after Stealth Rock
252+ Atk Choice Band Scizor U-turn vs. 0 HP / 0 Def Tapu Lele: 126-148 (86.8 - 102%) -- 18.8% chance to OHKO
252+ Atk Choice Band Technician Scizor Pursuit vs. 0 HP / 0 Def Tapu Lele: 72-85 (49.6 - 58.6%) -- 99.6% chance to 2HKO

252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 0 HP / 252 SpD Assault Vest Conkeldurr in Psychic Terrain: 162-192 (90 - 106.6%) -- 43.8% chance to OHKO
252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 0 HP / 252 SpD Assault Vest Conkeldurr in Psychic Terrain: 162-192 (90 - 106.6%) -- 68.8% chance to OHKO after Stealth Rock

252 SpA Tapu Lele Moonblast vs. 4 HP / 0 SpD Garchomp-Mega: 170-204 (92.3 - 110.8%) -- 93.8% chance to OHKO after Stealth Rock

252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 4 HP / 0 SpD Ambipom in Psychic Terrain: 160-190 (105.9 - 125.8%) -- guaranteed OHKO

252 SpA Tapu Lele Moonblast vs. 0 HP / 0 SpD Sigilyph: 99-117 (67.3 - 79.5%) -- 37.5% chance to OHKO after Stealth Rock
252 SpA Tapu Lele Psychic vs. 0 HP / 0 SpD Sigilyph in Psychic Terrain: 70-83 (47.6 - 56.4%) -- 84.8% chance to 2HKO



Lele is just one of the pokèmon you can't handle: Koko, MSalamence and Blaziken can be even more dangerous and less common pokèmon such us Gliscor represent big troubles. Tbh none of the six ones in your team should be used in BSS, so fixing it is rather useless. I'll just try to improve the single sets or give you more appropiate alternatives (when possibile) wich you can use in different teams.
(Sep 15, 2017, 07:14 PM)JaBird Wrote: Yanmega @ Life Orb                              
Ability: Speed Boost  
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe  
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk    
- Air Slash  
- Bug Buzz  
- Protect  
- Giga Drain
                                    
Scizor @ Scizorite
Ability: Light Metal
EVs: 252 HP / 52 Def / 204 SpD  
Careful Nature  
- Bullet Punch  
- Bug Bite
- Roost
- Swords Dance

Garchomp @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Rough Skin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Poison Jab  
- Outrage  
- Rock Slide/Dual Chop/Fire Fang
- Earthquake

Garchomp @ Yache Berry/Dragonium Z
Ability: Rough Skin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Poison Jab  
- Outrage  
- Swords Dance/Stealth Rock
- Earthquake/Fire Fang/Rock Tomb

Sigilyph @ Leftovers  
Ability: Magic Guard
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Timid Nature  
IVs: 0 Atk  
- Cosmic Power
- Stored Power
- Roost
- Dazzling Gleam/Charge Beam