Oct 27, 2017, 11:13 AM
I've never been much a fan of fan-fiction-esque writings, but I find this pretty entertaining. The first entry was a little lackluster, but it was the introduction, so it's excusable, especially when writing something like this. The second entry was much better, and the internal dialogue helped to convey imagery a lot better than it did the first time around. Overall, as a writer myself, I enjoyed it, and look forward to seeing more as the weeks go by!
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