[MINI-SERIES] I Am An Axew - Weekly Updates

[ScottyThunder]

It's not that it was necessarily slow or boring or anything, it was just a lot more of describing things around the character than the character progressing, which is perfectly fine, I'm just more into the interactions between characters in any art form, which you displayed quite well in the second entry and the latter half of the first. It just felt like not much went on in the first chapter because of how much of it was spent describing the environment. But, it is a first person narrative, so I can't say describing things through the brain chatter of the character is bad, I'm just used to third person stories since that's what I enjoy reading. Certainly don't change how you write to please me or anyone else, just keep doing what you're doing. I can't wait until Wednesday to see where it goes!